Tuesday, 1 October 2013

Page 2 script: 

Panel 10:
This time it goes to the other end of the table, there is a women standing in front of another woman with her back to her. This involves Casey and Domney. Domney has her suit halfway down and is standing in her bra. She is very pretty and curvy. Casey is standing behind her, she is very big and built.
Domney: Casey dear, can you zip me up?

Panel 11:
Casey starts zipping her up from behind.
Domney: What are we doing tonight?
Casey: I’m going to the King’s Castle tonight, there’s a band on. You can come with or not, but if you come I don’t want any of your fucking bitching.
Domney: Okay.

Panel 12:
Pulls out a little bit and can see Christophe and Hal at the end of the table, they are staring at Domney.
Domney: What do you think they’re talking about?
Casey: Probably about you, why don’t you cover yourself up instead of walking around like that; everyone staring at you like you’re piece of meat. 
Domney: Well…

Panel 13:
It pulls away looking Domney and Casey zipping each other up, with Christoff and Hal sitting down. Christoff is smoking a pipe whilst Hal is watching them. Chrstoff has a swastika on his neck and is reading a book.  
Hal: Is it just me or have Domney’s twins got bigger?
Christophe: Non, they are same, it is just, you are petite like Napoleon so it is grande to you.
Hal: Piss off you gay croissant!

Panel 14:
POV shot of Christophe reading a book. It’s a nationalist book, more about preaching than anything.
Hal: What book you reading?
Christophe: It’s visionary, it explains why our societe is breeded like dogs instead of the pure way like moi or Bella.
Hal: Yeah Bella, she’s something else…

Panel 15:
Bella has her leg on a chair and is putting on her tights. Shinsu is behind her leg on the chair and is staring at it. She has tattoo going around her leg. 

Panel 16:
Bella sits down on the chair next to Shinsu, whilst Shinsu is sitting on the chair with her legs apart smoking a cigarette.
Bella: You like the tat?
Shinsu: Yeah its nice, when did you get that?
Bella: Last week, I met a tattooist and he did it, amazing!
Shinsu: How much?
Bella: Don’t know I had no money, so I slept with him instead; only cost me 5 minutes. 
Shinsu: That quick?
Bella: Even quicker, he was done in a minute, spent the other 4 crying.

Panel 17:
Different shot of Shinsu and Bella, this time show Shinsu’s back which has a scar going across it.
Bella: How’d did that happen?
Shinsu: Fighting, think this is bad, you should see the guy that tried to rape me. Turns out he was a skinhead who was trying to punish me for being Korean. And all I wanted was a good lay.

Panel 18:
Back front shot of them both sitting on chairs looking at Christophe, still smoking.
Bella: Want a good lay? Ask Christophe, surprisingly good.
Shinsu: Well I’m Korean, so I don’t think that’s gonna happen.
Bella: Bullshit…show him any ethnic set of tits, in his eyes they’re all Aryan.

Panel 19:
This panel shows the door open, with Brand and Vincent coming in, one after the other. Shinsu is at the bottom of the page looking back towards them both.
Shinsu: About time, you’re late, we’re on in 5 minutes.
Vincent: Maybe your five minutes too early.
Shinsu: What does that even mean? And what is that smell?
Brand: It’s the smell of a south American baristas.
Vincent: Hahahaha Add in more swearing.

Panel 20:
Bella: Everyone, let’s go, they’re ready for us to come.
Vincent: You sure are Bella, give me 2 minutes (he is off screen but says it anyways)

Bella: Take half an hour, you still couldn’t do it Vincent.

This page was harder to do than Page 1, the main reason being that there were more characters that were moving around and more dialogue. The plus is that I can work on more character designs. With Bella's tattoo design (panel 6), I was trying to do something sexy and not a big design or too tribal either, so I just went with a mehndi design.

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